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]]> Comment on Dialogue by theredpants http://entangledd.wordpress.com/dialogue/#comment-66 theredpants Wed, 06 Aug 2008 07:59:47 +0000 http://entangledd.wordpress.com/?page_id=59#comment-66 This is a very good piece of dialogue. Very realistic and good handling of the tension which mounts steadily and adds a lot to the argument. Good work! This is a very good piece of dialogue. Very realistic and good handling of the tension which mounts steadily and adds a lot to the argument. Good work!

]]> Comment on Visual Trigger by theredpants http://entangledd.wordpress.com/visual-trigger/#comment-65 theredpants Wed, 06 Aug 2008 07:54:50 +0000 http://entangledd.wordpress.com/?page_id=47#comment-65 This story is about a tragic misunderstanding but it doesn't follow the conventions of greek tragedy. There is no realization, fatal flaw, etc. Would've been a tragedy if Jonathan had actually bought the toy with his savings for Benjamin and then they quarrel before Jonathan has a chance to explain and Jonathan gets hurt. This story is about a tragic misunderstanding but it doesn’t follow the conventions of greek tragedy. There is no realization, fatal flaw, etc. Would’ve been a tragedy if Jonathan had actually bought the toy with his savings for Benjamin and then they quarrel before Jonathan has a chance to explain and Jonathan gets hurt.

]]> Comment on People Watch by theredpants http://entangledd.wordpress.com/people-watch/#comment-64 theredpants Wed, 06 Aug 2008 07:50:52 +0000 http://entangledd.wordpress.com/?page_id=45#comment-64 Good observations on the 1st subject. There should've been more insights for the second character - just more thoughts and insights on her actions and behaviour. Good observations on the 1st subject. There should’ve been more insights for the second character – just more thoughts and insights on her actions and behaviour.

]]> Comment on 50 Words Stories by theredpants http://entangledd.wordpress.com/50-words-stories/#comment-63 theredpants Wed, 06 Aug 2008 07:47:05 +0000 http://entangledd.wordpress.com/?page_id=39#comment-63 Story 4 stands out as one of the best ones in your five because it's got all the qualities of a good story (set up, twist, etc.) Story 2 and 5 seem to be an extended openers though - have to be careful of that when you're working with a word limit like 50 words because it's a test of telling a full story in 50 words. Story 4 stands out as one of the best ones in your five because it’s got all the qualities of a good story (set up, twist, etc.) Story 2 and 5 seem to be an extended openers though – have to be careful of that when you’re working with a word limit like 50 words because it’s a test of telling a full story in 50 words.

]]> Comment on The End by gollee http://entangledd.wordpress.com/2008/08/02/the-end/#comment-62 gollee Mon, 04 Aug 2008 16:27:44 +0000 http://entangledd.wordpress.com/?p=61#comment-62 actually hor, im not 100% sure if we're changing class next sem. don't be so sad la. my friend said some courses change every yr not every sem. actually hor, im not 100% sure if we’re changing class next sem. don’t be so sad la. my friend said some courses change every yr not every sem.

]]> Comment on EMOtion-ist (Week 3) by theredpants http://entangledd.wordpress.com/2008/05/03/emotionist/#comment-61 theredpants Mon, 04 Aug 2008 06:35:44 +0000 http://entangledd.wordpress.com/?p=40#comment-61 I think happy is the way to go. I agree with you - who wants to be emo? I think happy is the way to go. I agree with you – who wants to be emo?

]]> Comment on The End by yangguo http://entangledd.wordpress.com/2008/08/02/the-end/#comment-60 yangguo Sun, 03 Aug 2008 15:05:53 +0000 http://entangledd.wordpress.com/?p=61#comment-60 It's not the end, it's the start. for more information, refer to my blog. LOL It’s not the end, it’s the start.
for more information, refer to my blog.
LOL

]]> Comment on Dialogue by michelle http://entangledd.wordpress.com/dialogue/#comment-59 michelle Fri, 20 Jun 2008 11:40:41 +0000 http://entangledd.wordpress.com/?page_id=59#comment-59 yea.. used iMovie for the title all those.. save it as .mov file and add into the garage band. haha. yea.. used iMovie for the title all those.. save it as .mov file and add into the garage band. haha.

]]> Comment on Dialogue by yangguo http://entangledd.wordpress.com/dialogue/#comment-58 yangguo Fri, 20 Jun 2008 04:13:43 +0000 http://entangledd.wordpress.com/?page_id=59#comment-58 haha, woo, u did a title screen sia, i realise i missed out that, haha. so u use iMovie to do that? so its .mov file? haha, woo, u did a title screen sia, i realise i missed out that, haha.
so u use iMovie to do that? so its .mov file?

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